Stormbird editing

Latest Stormbird Cover

With some critical feedback on the BETA edition of my novel I've been busy editing, reviewing and fixing.

I've also revised the cover design to make it more eye catching and with extra text to highlight that the novel is aimed at the young adult market.

Editing and fixing the text has been a tough gig, but I think the final work will be better for it.

I anticipate the release of Stormbird to be now early in the new year.

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